Love can come in many different ways, shapes, and forms. In the story “The Bass, the River, and Sheila Mant,” the narrator was having a tough time choosing between something he loves to day and the girl that he has been liking all summer. In the story " Catch the Moon” Luis changes from the begging of the story were he was a mean and troubled little kid to for the fist time in his life since his mom passed away that he did something good for someone.
The narrator and Shelia Mant.The narrator has to choose between Sheila Mant and the fact that he might have to give up the one thing that he loves fishing. he ends up giving up the fish for the girl and every since then he has regretted it.The narrator changed because he now understands that their other Sheila Mants in the world.People shouldn’t try and change the way they are for other people, also people come and go but only stay true to yourself and that's all that matter.
The main characters of catch the Moon are Naomi and Luis.Every since Luis mom died he became a troubled kid and he joined a gang and was in and out of court. Then he meet Naomi and the night he found him self crying he realized that she was there looking at him but not laughing. she was drawing a picture of him but a good picture and at the end he ended up doing something good for someone and that is something he haven't done in a long time.Luis changed because he went from being mean a stilling form people to actually doing something nice for someone.People walk down a road and sometimes they fall off. But it only takes one person to get them back on the right path.
“The Bass, he River, and Sheila Mant,” the narrator was having a tough time choosing between something he loves to day and the girl that he has been liking all summer. In the story " Catch the Moon” Luis changes from the begging of the story were he was a mean and troubled little kid to for the fist time in his life since his mom passed away that he did something good for someone.The main thing that both of these books have in common are they both have people in the end who decided to do something a learned form there mistakes and tried to make a better life.
good job Shaurice on your essay I like the way you compared the stories really neat.
ReplyDeleteI don't understand why I can't see you essay. But if Aaron said it was good then it must be.
ReplyDeleteThe best part of your essay is your comparison in general because you made perfect sense and your writing clashed perfectly. Good job Shaurice.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job, but it is hard to understand your theme clearly. Also remember you weren't supposed to embed it")
ReplyDeleteI Think that we did a good job, but I am not sure on the embed or not.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with Becky, your essay has a good foundation, but your theme is confusing.
ReplyDeleteYour essay was decent but what was the theme supose to mean :)
ReplyDeleteI agree, your theme is confusing but it was a well worded essay.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Shaurice, the best part of yor essay is the way you compared both of the stories. The theme was confusing but overall it was great
ReplyDeleteThe best part of your essay was the second paragraph because it was well written.
ReplyDeleteWhat did Luis do that was "mean" and what did he do "actually doing something nice"? I can see that you are trying to add more depth to your writing but remember to keep the details and analysis very clear.
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